Poor Huia's

Poor Huia's

We have been doing things to do with a mystery story that we slowly find more about. This is what we have found out so far... We are a museum and a man named Richerd Sunderland sent a letter to us about he was cleaning out his family home and he found this weird chest of is grandma's and we later found out that it had a diary and a piece of Special jewellery and that we found out not too long ago that the Jewellery was a brooch and to be specific, a Huia brooch (His Grandma's Husband gave it to her for a birthday present) You will find more out in the video down below.

Here's the video (I'm the Filmer so you will not hear me or see me)

Did the film communicate the script?

Yes

Did it communicate the rising emotion being portrayed?

Near the end, it was more understandable that it was emotional

What could you shoot differently?

Not having the brooch high on top of the pole - Because Rose couldn't reach it

What would make your film more understandable?

A Narrator - To introduce at the beginning to make more sense

What would give your film more emotional impact?

Dramatic Music (But we weren't allowed any editing)